Mr.+Noble+Letter

Zed Williams Rm. 23 Fairfield Intermediate School

26th June, 2009

Mr. Noble Fairfield Intermediate School

Dear. Mr Noble  , 

 My name is Zed Williams, I am 11 years old, and I am from Miss Crawford's class, room 23. I think this school is a great school and should be where almost every year 7 and 8 should go.

I do not really have any hobbies, ones I do have are on computer (obviously because I am in a computer class) I like soccer but currently am not playing it this year. My other hobbies involve skating, swimming and biking.

A few things I don't like and you don't like this either probably is BULLYING. There seems to be a lot of bulling go on. It makes some people like me not feel SAFE AND SECURE. But I know something bad will eventually happen to them and they will get in trouble.  I have learned a lot of new things in Writing, Maths, Reading, and English skills. I have even learned more on things I already know. Such as getting better at my basic facts with new and unique strategies that are sure to make maths easy for you. I have improved my reading from last year a lot now.

For the school, I think we could get our own dental clinic, even though there is a dental clinic already just across the road. The government might say there is not enough money and children our age should be responsible enough, but still, it is dangerous. Or maybe certain weeks or terms it goes to different schools entirely or maybe just every month. Plus we could make it safer on the play ground by putting padding on the ground that could stop people from hurting them selves more. But that's up to you. 

This year I went to Pauanui camp, it was awesome, especially the food. But next year when I go to Port Waikato, it will be a blast especially with night camp and abseiling. <span style="font-size: 64%; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"> <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">

You need to remember that we can't use contractions in a formal letter. I have underlined these to change. The letter needs to have - Your sincerely, Zed Williams - at the end. Print out your final copy for the teacher to read.//**
 * //Miss Crawford - A good start, Zed. I'm glad you are enjoying Fairfield so much :)