Report+Writing

This is report writing on obese really over weight people.  3 sentences || Link with reasons. Intereting || some links || Links for reasons.order Heaps of facts explanations. || A few spelling mistakes. || Very formal. No spelling mistakes ||  //Our children should not be __**cursed (your opinion, not fact)**__ with obesity caused by an addictive food or place like Mc DONALDS. This is a crisis for **__newzealand__**. More and more people are **__coming__** overweight. //  //Child hood obesity is very over weight people, **__very, very overweight people very very over weight people (Why repeat yourself?)__**. I__**f 1 of 4 people are obese or 8 of 32 in a class are obese so eight of them are overweight obesity is to adopt healthier habits for the entire family**__ __**(Does this sound right?**__). Obesity is measured by B.M.I. (Body Mass Index). B.M.I is determined by your weight in kilograms divided by your height (in meters squared). //
 * || [[image:http://www.mcdonalds.co.nz/images/ourFood/ourfood_03.jpg width="147" height="147" align="bottom" caption="Main MENU" link="http://www.mcdonalds.co.nz/ourFood/mainMenu.asp"]] || [[image:http://www.mcdonalds.co.nz/images/ourFood/ourfood_04.jpg width="122" height="135" align="bottom" caption="salads plus - taste+choice+vitality" link="http://www.mcdonalds.co.nz/ourFood/lightchoices.asp"]][[image:file:///C:/DOCUME%7E1/zed/LOCALS%7E1/Temp/moz-screenshot.jpg]][[image:http://www.mcdonalds.co.nz/images/ourFood/breakfast-icon.jpg width="122" height="135" align="bottom" caption="Breakfast Menu" link="http://www.mcdonalds.co.nz/ourFood/breakfast.asp"]] This is a rubic of my report writing. ||
 * || __**Prestructul **__ || __**unistructul **__ || <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">__**<span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Multistructul **__ || <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">__**<span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">relational **__ || <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">__**<span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Extennded absract **__ ||
 * <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">__**Intro**__ || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">None || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Not interesting 1 sentence || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">2 sentences no links || <span style="background: rgb(0, 153, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">-Links
 * <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">__**Paragraphs**__ || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">No paragraphs || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">1 paragraph No titles || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">2 big paragraphs || <span style="background: rgb(0, 153, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Order || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Logical order. Titles. Links. ||
 * <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">__**Description**__ || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">No description || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">No order || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">No order more facts || <span style="background: rgb(0, 153, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">More order
 * <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">__**Conclution**__ || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">No conclution || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">A random sentence || <span style="background: rgb(0, 153, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">2 Random sentences || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Links. Starting to get interesting || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Links for reasons. Very interesting. ||
 * <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">__**Language**__ || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Random || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Not formal spelling mistakes || __<span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Less spelling mistakes, more formal __ || <span style="background: rgb(0, 153, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Formal.
 * <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">__**Maps/ diograms**__ || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">None || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">1 Diogram not to do with text || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">2 diograms not to do with text || <span style="background: rgb(0, 153, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Proper maps link to words. || <span style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255) none repeat scroll 0% 50%; -moz-background-clip: -moz-initial; -moz-background-origin: -moz-initial; -moz-background-inline-policy: -moz-initial;">Loads of maps and diograms to do with the topic. Very interesting ||

//<span style="font-family: Times New Roman,serif; font-size: 22pt;">__**Children are obese because of the parents and the lack of self management (Is that fact or your opinion?)**__. ////<span style="font-family: Times New Roman,serif; font-size: 22pt;"> Lots of people do advertising for their junk food like Burger king, Pizza Hut,Dominoes Pizza, Hells Pizza and Mc Donald's. To get more people, they sell special offers, coupons and toys. Then there's huge adult meals coming up like Big Macs and stuff like that,even tho they have healthy food like salads it's not really healthy (having sugar on salads not needed). //

//<span style="font-size: 22pt; font-family: Times New Roman,serif;">Not very much people are doing exercise thats why there is Push Play and Project Energize to get people active. (Well a reason). If they want to become healthy and fit, people need to take responsibility and get off their behinds. To be healthy one thing is to have a healthy diet, Having takeaways once every two weeks is okay but not every week. //

// <span style="font-family: Times New Roman,serif;">This is a serious problem to our country and others. If we are to become a healthy country we need to act fast and healthy <span style="font-family: Courier New,monospace;"> //

// 20 percent healthy, 30 percent fat and 50 percent obese. //